Application Writing Question

Hi I just need to complete this essay for scholar ship. (1) I pasted the prompt, (2) I pasted a messy paragraph of my personal answers to form my outline around AND (3) I’ve attatched an outline that explains the best format for the scholar ship essay.

(1)”All applicants must submit an essay/personal statement in which you describe your most laudable academic accomplishments, achievements, and any unique recognition awarded to you on the basis of your academic or research performances. You may also include a statement on your personal aspirations and career goals. Include a discussion of how scholarship assistance will help your meet your goals. Remember, this is often the best opportunity you have to speak directly to the scholarship review committee! Please check spelling and grammar carefully before submitting your essay. Limit: 1000 words.”

(2) “My gpa is 3.24, deans list fall 2022 & summer 2025, i excelled in -BUL 4310 – FIN 3403-TAX 4001 -ACG 4651 -ENT 4113 , i chose accounting because i really enjoy helping people, choosing a major thats very diverse with any feild i can work in with this degree and make alot of money, im really good at analyszing things and im good at organizing well and following the rules. i grew up with alot of sucessful parents of my cheerleading teamates because i was an athlete for 10 years, i looked up to them. ive been working full time since ive been 17. ive been fully reliant on myself since ive been 19-20. lived on my own with my boyfriend and friend in 2023, after my parents had a nasty divorce ive been just worrying about myself. during that time one of my good friends passed away, effected my academic performance but i got back into school and doing well since. i work as a server/bartender in fortlauderdale. i do organized cash handling all day, i do upselling , marketing, connection with all types of people, im very attentive and give incredible service. i havent had an accounting internships. success for my future , my future children deserve a successful mother, my care and the hardworking type of person i am deserves to succeed in everything i do, thatsa why i dont quit, i dont quit because i know what im capable of and im hungry. im going to get an accounting internship, my current job has discussed that they have an accounting department and they would love to work with my in an internship position in the future. getting my masters at FIU, and my CPA certificate. i want this degree to help me live my life goals of helping my children have a comfortble happy life to focusd on their dreams and to help my mom with her life financially for everything she sacrificed for me.” I attached the outline (3). Let me know if you have any questions.